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Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of pageLink to this message   By B. Simon / J. Coviere (Bsimonjcoviere) on Sunday, March 5, 2000 - 06:51 pm:

Entertainment Documentary for 30 minute TV slot ie: ESPN, etc. Project follows five very attractive women Harley Davidson riders as they ride through scenic backgrounds and join others at all female motorcycle rally in So. California. Interest in Harley Davidson motor sports at all time high. Combine this with self confident and "Sexy" female participants equals "can't miss" possibilities. Producers, Director, Production Team and all elements in place.

Comments: Seeking Financial partners for $150,000 BTL projected budget. 33% investor participation.
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Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of pageLink to this message   By Alan A. Armer (Alana) on Tuesday, March 21, 2000 - 02:49 pm:

MODERATOR ANALYSIS

Iron Maidens - a female motorcycle gang sounds sexy and provocative and should certainly find production money. But your premise seems more sell than substance. I'd like to see more specifics about who the girls are, where they go, what adventures befall them. Give identities to two or three of the girls or, if the show is based on actual women, describe each of them briefly.

Is this an actual gang or a composite of several such gangs? Are they in conflict with other female gangs? Or with male motorcycle gangs? Are there conflicts within the gang?

Colorful stuff - and sexy. Good luck!

Critique by Alan A. Armer


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